The historical building in your place is in bad condition. Write to the local government. In your letter
Why the building is important
what is the present condition
what actions must be taken
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing ti outline an area I feel our city could improve. Please allow me to elaborate. The only ancient building that remained in our city is in poor condition. Given that our economy depends on tourism to a larger extent, it is of primary importance to maintain its appearance.
Acid rains and cold weather have had a negative impact on masonry. Chunks of stones that have fallen off could be found in the area nearby. Moreover, the paint chipped off the pinnacles, which made it look hideous. Many people expressed their concern about the condition of the building, as it is not safe to walk around it. To make matters worse, flying buttress are no longer attached to walls, which will result in the church being damaged further.
Regarding action that needs to be taken, I would appreciate if you restricted access and started restoring it. Money could be raised with the help of the city's largest charitable organization. I hope you will consider my suggestions.
I look forward to seeing the results.
Sergei Khrameev
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 154, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'citys the largest'.
Suggestion: citys the largest
...ey could be raised with the help of the citys largest charitable organization. I hope you wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87150837989 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58802161354 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.715083798883 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9972169513 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0769230769 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.090499571799 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248852085464 0.0766984524023 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383865355146 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0442385968474 0.12726935374 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323227122991 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.