Dear Sir,
I hope you will find this letter in the best of health and happiness. I am writing to express my concerns related to our town committee building which is one of the historical buildings in the town.
The building requires reconstruction in the same design which will reflect the beautiful history of our town. As you know, all the meetings are taken place by the national leaders in this building every Friday. Due to the crowd present inside the building, it is necessary to renovate the interior and exterior parts of the hall.
Because the building is antiquated and became in devastating condition. The walls and roof of the building are showing fissures. Apart from that, the pillars which hold the building have become weaker. Thus, we need to reconstruct the architecture before any tragic incident occurs at this historical place and harm workers and visitors who are coming to see this antiquated building.
We need to bring a well-experienced architect to make the same architecture of the building. In this way, you can hire a construction company to reconstruct our prestigious committee hall which represents and describes our town and its culture because of its design and story.
I am looking forward to hearing a positive response related to this concern.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, thus, well, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1376146789 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86062048628 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577981651376 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6815648299 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1538461538 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151551022535 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579974709626 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458364029172 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738717102916 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609675047324 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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