You are going for a one-week vacation and your friend agreed to stay at your place while you are away. Write a letter to him/her.
In your letter, you should:
thank her/him and tell the dates of your holiday
explain how he/she enters the house
describe what you expect him/her to do.
Dear Rose,
First of all, I want to thank you for staying at my apartment while I'm away. Anyway, I am writing this letter to give quick information about some do's and dont's while living at my place.
I'll be leaving tomorrow before sunrise, and I'll be giving the apartment keys to the security guard whom you'll find on the ground floor during security checks into my building. I've informed the security guard that you'll be coming to collect the keys to my apartment and will be staying for a week during my absence. I'll come back to the city on 15th July 2021.
Once you entered my building, you may go onto the seventh floor at 701 house address. The number 701 is the address of my Rockwood society building 4. By any chance, if you have problems opening up the lock of my house, give me a ring and I'll solve the problem for you. Apart from this, please ensure to pick up newspaper and milk bottle from the front door on a daily basis in the morning or else it will be left out and the front door mattress would get dirty. You'll find the guest room unlock, and other bedrooms locked. Also, I have made a checklist for all the necessities to ensure that you do not face any problems while living at my place. Finally, please be careful to make a serene environment as all the residents living in my society do not like loud music noises. So, if you want to play the music, keep the doors and windows locked. After coming back, I'll take you out to your favorite restaurant which is in Downtown.
Looking forward to seeing you on my return.
Regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...k you for staying at my apartment while Im away. Anyway, I am writing this letter ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...and donts while living at my place. Ill be leaving tomorrow before sunrise, and...
^^^
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...be leaving tomorrow before sunrise, and Ill be giving the apartment keys to the sec...
^^^
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...artment keys to the security guard whom youll find on the ground floor during securit...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...uring security checks into my building. Ive informed the security guard that youll ...
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Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...g. Ive informed the security guard that youll be coming to collect the keys to my apa...
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Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...e staying for a week during my absence. Ill come back to the city on 15th July 2021...
^^^
Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...he lock of my house, give me a ring and Ill solve the problem for you. Apart from t...
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Line 7, column 464, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You'll
...he front door mattress would get dirty. Youll find the guest room unlock, and other b...
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Line 7, column 867, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... and windows locked. After coming back, Ill take you out to your favorite restauran...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, finally, first, if, look, may, so, while, apart from, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 291.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43298969072 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18161370614 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 127.690721649 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4686974613 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183119888344 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643702362823 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663621334372 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117295921322 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696555566946 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.