Dear John,
I hope you are very well!
I won the Nation writing prize! You do not know how joyful I am but I want to say with you help I am able to achieve this unbelievable target. Many thanks!
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The tour include returen flight tickets, accomodations and local guide tour service, which we pack our belongings and some clothes is enough. We can go to the night zoo, famous port and enjoy local delicious food. I am so excited.
I hope the vacation can be thank you gift and the joy moment I like share it with you.
Hope you have chance come it with me.
Kind regards,
Joe
- Some people believe that academic subjects such as chemistry, physics, and history should be taught in schools, while others believe that students will derive more benefit from studying practical subjects, such as motor mechanics and cooking.Discuss both 78
- Young people are getting more influenced by friends than parents or teachers Do you agree or disagree 89
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 56
- You recently ordered an item that was advertised as having a discount from the normal price but you have found that when you paid you did not get the discount Write to the company In your letterExplain that you did not get the discountTell them where 73
- Write a letter to translation agency about the report to be translated urgently.In your letter, you should:•explain the content of letter•why you need translated report•why do you need it urgently. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 670.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24050632911 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18972707494 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639240506329 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.2687677174 44.8134815571 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.75 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225211168231 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901059101964 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773489765928 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127191739731 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563855354673 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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