An item of clothing you purchased but found somewhat the issues with it, once you returned home.
What the item
describes what was the issues with it
and what you expect the manager to do
An item of clothing you purchased but found somewhat the issues with it, once you returned home.
What the item
describes what was the issues with it
and what you expect the manager to do
Dear Mr. Manager,
I am your frequent customer, last Sunday I brought a shirt from your store without trying it in your shop.
When I tried the shirt in my home, I came to know about the fault.
There is a stitching issue in the shirt, I would like to put in your knowledge because so that it will be easy for you to recognise the matter when I visit your showroom.
In this subject matter, as the shirt is new and unused by me with all the price tags intact. I would like to request you to kindly replace the piece and deliver me the new shirt.
Best regards
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the manager to do Dear Mr. Manager, I am your frequent customer, last Sunday...
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Line 8, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r store without trying it in your shop. When I tried the shirt in my home, I cam...
^^^
Line 9, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y home, I came to know about the fault. There is a stitching issue in the shirt...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the matter when I visit your showroom. In this subject matter, as the shirt is ...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the piece and deliver me the new shirt. Best regards XYZ
^^^^^
Line 15, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iver me the new shirt. Best regards XYZ
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 634.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 146.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34246575342 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08097477051 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63698630137 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 183.6 290.88556701 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.6825497313 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5714285714 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440586595666 0.216113520407 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18005713733 0.0766984524023 235% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.225985201495 0.0603063233224 375% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253691856995 0.12726935374 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.247648005427 0.0580467560999 427% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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