I am Satpreet Singh resident of Yamuna nagar city. I am writing this letter to give my views about the option that your company has given to the local citizens
regarding the funds you are going to spent for the welfare of local residents.
As, mentioned by your company there are two plans,first is to sponsor a local childre's sports team, beacuse it will not only encurage the youth towards the sports also it will give them a stage to rise and show their hidden talent.
And as per second option which is related to a open-air concerts, also has many plus points.It will be great step to entertainment the local public. Since our town is small and so far not a single event has been taken place because of the reason this open-air concert will be the new experience for us and I am sure youth will enjoy is most because it will be going to happen in our city first time.
I would personaly stand with the first option which is to sponsor local children's sports team because this will motivate childrens ,moreover local children's sport team are not getting any funds for the governement so giving them platform will be give postive impact to our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
... company has given to the local citizens regarding the funds you are going to spe...
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'spend'
... regarding the funds you are going to spent for the welfare of local residents. As...
Line 4, column 50, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , first
...oned by your company there are two plans,first is to sponsor a local childres sports t...
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
...s per second option which is related to a open-air concerts, also has many plus p...
Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: A_PLURAL
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'concert'?
...d option which is related to a open-air concerts, also has many plus points.It will be g...
Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
...air concerts, also has many plus points.It will be great step to entertainment the...
Line 6, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
...eam because this will motivate childrens ,moreover local childrens sport team are ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, regarding, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63255813953 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2976461725 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576744186047 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.0027828874 44.8134815571 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.285714286 76.5299724578 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7142857143 16.8248392259 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214519640355 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939438410342 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581185542815 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119090248848 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347273825578 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
automated_readability_index: 15.7 8.37731958763 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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