Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to provide you feedback on both Sports Team and Concerts sponsoring. Now a days, Sports is a word's growing education where kids can enjoy their life or they can learn lots of things. However, It's a your good commencing for sponsoring pupils. In our area, few schools are going to do sports education compulsory after your sponsorship. However, Parents also happy after good initiative, even children also living healthy life after playing game everyday.
I'll narrate here benefits of concerts, In these days, there are lots of local orchestra which is performing events which is very useful for young generation because they can enjoy or they can learn lots of thing from music. Sponsorship is very useful for them because due to scarcity of money they can not bear expenditure of musical instruments. Few people which is having splendent talent in music but due to lack of money they can show their talent. However, People can meet each other in concerts which is very useful.
So, according to my opinion company spending money in a correct way and it would be grateful if company will spend more money on sports & concerts in future.
Looking forward an update from you soon.
Your Sincerely,
Raj
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Sir or Madam, Im writing to provide you feedback on both...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...th Sports Team and Concerts sponsoring. Now a days, Sports is a words growing education wh...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ports Team and Concerts sponsoring. Now a days, Sports is a words growing education wh...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...they can learn lots of things. However, Its a your good commencing for sponsoring p...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'your'?
Suggestion: a; your
... can learn lots of things. However, Its a your good commencing for sponsoring pupils. ...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... living healthy life after playing game everyday. Ill narrate here benefits of conce...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...y life after playing game everyday. Ill narrate here benefits of concerts, In t...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of things'.
Suggestion: lots of things
...ecause they can enjoy or they can learn lots of thing from music. Sponsorship is very useful ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a correct way" with adverb for "correct"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ng to my opinion company spending money in a correct way and it would be grateful if company wil...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...l spend more money on sports & concerts in future. Looking forward an update from you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97607655502 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45967016575 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7550319615 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168170808214 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619088160201 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471507763856 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906981603431 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393831131363 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.