Dear John and Sarah,
I hope things are going great on your side. I am still unable to get out of the memorable moments we had during my last visit to your place. By the way, I received the photos of that trip yesterday.
Firstly, thank you so much for the photos. It was kind of surprising to get them while thinking about all the wonderful memories we had. Above all, your hospitality was marvelous and makes me think of visiting there more often.
I was thinking to put the pen on paper since the end of my trip, but my hectic schedule at office is not permitting me to spare some time. Our company recently received a new project requirement from a reputed client, and being the senior representative, I am deeply involved in multiple meetings each day. Anyway, I am happy to finally find some leisure time to write to you guys.
On this occasion, I would like you both to visit my place for the upcoming long-weekend. Moreover, it is my birthday on the same weekend. So, lets have a fun time together.
I cannot wait to see you guys soon.
Best regards,
Jonathon Trott
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages ? 56
- You have borrowed something from your friend, but it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend and say- Apologize for damaging the product- How was it damaged?- What will you do about it? 73
- you rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students.however, there are several problems with this house that need fixing.you also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom. 73
- It is not necessary to have access to the Internet to live a full life.What is your opinion? 78
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, finally, first, firstly, moreover, so, still, while, kind of, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52525252525 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50985202919 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69696969697 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.905956734 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199263523513 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635597839415 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551147236203 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881915857756 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442481092294 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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