Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn't write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any address.
Dear Anand
Hello! How are you? Yesterday, I was missing you all and when, I came back from college and opened the door, I saw a courier from your end. I just unzipped the envelope and say the pictures of our last summer vacations.
Firstly, I would like to say a big thankyou for these photographs and really sorry for not inscribing you before, as y final exams were going on and I had to study for that. But after seeing the photos , I was very happy. I vividly remember the day we went for our holidays on the beach. Those moments would always be memorable, how all of us had a blast that day and took so much pictures and did shopping for our respective families. Again, thankyou for such a warm welcome at your place and for a lovely food by mother.
Next month, my college will going to be closed for summer vacations. So, now this time, I invite all four of you at y native land. So that, I can have an honour to guide you to famous places over here and Moreover, there is also no problem for accommodation, as now i own my flat also.
I hope to see you soon and give my regards to your parents.
Yours truly
Shivam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...dy for that. But after seeing the photos , I was very happy. I vividly remember th...
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Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... of us had a blast that day and took so much pictures and did shopping for our respe...
^^^^
Line 5, column 399, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'shop'
Suggestion: shop
...t day and took so much pictures and did shopping for our respective families. Again, tha...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
... mother. Next month, my college will going to be closed for summer vacations. So, ...
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Line 7, column 267, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...so no problem for accommodation, as now i own my flat also. I hope to see you ...
^
Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...for accommodation, as now i own my flat also. I hope to see you soon and give my ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26267281106 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29193060104 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649769585253 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1796081947 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1538461538 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281827774693 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945806083735 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037375780404 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159194554165 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264906934131 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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