Hi Diana and Judi,
Hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing to express my thanks after receiving our holiday snaps. Those are great ones and I was feeling nostalgic on the moments we spend together. I was overwhelmed on seeing the pictures. We were able to visit some breathtaking spots like top-view point located at Marine Mountain, the Green Valley River and St.Thomas hill trekking. I will cherish this trip forever. Thank you so much for researching on the climate, best places to visit during August and mode of transport much earlier to my arrival.
Also, I apologize for not writing as soon as I reach India. Since my exams were approaching in September first week, I had to focus on that. On preparing to the exam, I barely find time to contact you all. Additionally, my father fell sick and I had to take care of him. Currently, things are getting better as my father is recovering and my exams are over for this semester. As December is the best place to visit Kerala, southern part of India, please plan a month’s vacation to stay here. I will do the arrangements for the stay, food and transportation to visit in and around Kerala. We have lot more places to explore and enjoy. Please block your calendar accordingly. Hope to hear from your guys.
Yours’ sincerely,
Chitra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thomas
...Mountain, the Green Valley River and St.Thomas hill trekking. I will cherish this trip...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...m. Currently, things are getting better as my father is recovering and my exams ar...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73593073593 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.655822105 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65367965368 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6177093764 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.7777777778 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8333333333 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214677213292 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576330947315 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439113141846 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155824855105 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0112708415823 0.0580467560999 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.32 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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