Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn't write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any address.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sachin and Anjali,
I hope this letter finds you well. First of all I tender my apology for not being able to reply you earlier . As after returning from holiday i joined new project team, I was completely occupied from my work.
My big thank you to both of you for sharing fantastic and memorable photos of our last holiday trip.Even my parents were much impressed with the scenic natural beauty of the places seen in the photograps. Indeed it was a quality time spent with you guys and it rejuvenates me every time I think of those moments.
Why can’t we plan the get-together again in next summer ? This time around you guys visit my place. Here some beautiful natural places are around ,we can plan some short trips to these places. I will be released from current project by that time and will have very less work pressure. I believe you guys will also have summer holidays during that time.
Hope to hear from you guys soon on our next plan.
Take care,
Ajay
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Essay evaluation report
i joined new project team, I was completely occupied from my work.
i joined a new project team, and I was completely occupied from my work.
I will be released from current project
I will be released from the current project
Sentence: My big thank you to both of you for sharing fantastic and memorable photos of our last holiday trip.Even my parents were much impressed with the scenic natural beauty of the places seen in the photograps.
Error: photograps Suggestion: photograph
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2 //you have issues on 'a, an, the'
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 178 250
No. of Characters: 771 1500
No. of Different Words: 117 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.653 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.331 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.079 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 45 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 27 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 13 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 9 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.833 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.102 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.386 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.474 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.227 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...his letter finds you well. First of all I tender my apology for not being able to...
^
Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... for not being able to reply you earlier . As after returning from holiday i joine...
^^
Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rlier . As after returning from holiday i joined new project team, I was complete...
^
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Even
...morable photos of our last holiday trip.Even my parents were much impressed with the...
^^^^
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...y of the places seen in the photograps. Indeed it was a quality time spent with you gu...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...some beautiful natural places are around ,we can plan some short trips to these pl...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'i think', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.198979591837 0.220444632235 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.173469387755 0.167888034529 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0867346938776 0.0606518309736 143% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0561224489796 0.0506257000042 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.132653061224 0.118615021944 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112244897959 0.107062808482 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0408163265306 0.041066498444 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.21419420378 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0204081632653 0.0385302599488 53% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0816326530612 0.0714148451538 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0255102040816 0.0191574576366 133% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00510204081633 0.00930345855455 55% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 980.0 1141.60824742 86% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.134020619 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4748603352 5.53046319177 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78085437643 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.262569832402 0.284621296913 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.173184357542 0.211203875043 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0893854748603 0.133321485273 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0670391061453 0.0843313296314 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21419420378 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664804469274 0.622163163488 107% => OK
Word variations: 68.4719324453 62.8969750728 109% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 12.9587628866 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.9166666667 16.4300151701 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7117309986 44.7399317507 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6666666667 90.9928171075 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 16.4300151701 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.613754768223 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.09278350515 287% => OK
Readability: 32.2351024209 37.5504026743 86% => OK
Elegance: 0.971830985915 1.13073093955 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302370179111 0.331212695627 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0686065762109 0.0927372745006 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0888790709804 0.0736520305886 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.572058235336 0.579516596996 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.224939677176 0.180689518051 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978832580287 0.122183219658 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758115434744 0.0765303033291 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.129756144425 0.211926503985 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0750557432213 0.0737400523855 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144921068836 0.203819188451 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881471740137 0.067151250289 131% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 8.32989690722 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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