Dear Chris and Mark,
I hope this letter finds you in good spirits. I am writing this letter to thank you for the hospitality that you people have shown me during the stay in Sydney and the lovely photos that you sent me yesterday.
Thank you for being a gracious host and organizing such a wonderful trip and for sending me the beautiful photographs. Sydney is almost picture perfect with an extraordinary landscape, vibrant culture and a fantastic city particularly up in the area where you are. Moreover, talking about the photos, I think the photos we took while riding on the horses at a horse ranch and at the theme park were fabulous. All the photos are amazing, and we all look absolutely stunning in those photos.
Apologize for not writing earlier as I got insanely busy with my work, emails and meetings which I needed to take care of immediately after coming back from holiday. Besides, a severe cold forced me to take a few days off from office and I struggled to regain momentum at work and at home.
I would like to invite both of you to visit India. We will be celebrating our parent's 50th wedding anniversary next month and I expect you on this special occasion. It will be a chance for you to meet my rest of family and see a bit of India. Last time, during our conversation you have mentioned that you have been planning a trip to India for a while and I urge you to seriously consider making it this year. There’s plenty of room and I will pick up at the airport.
I look forward to seeing you soon. Take care.
Best regards,
XYZJ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'pictured'.
Suggestion: pictured
...beautiful photographs. Sydney is almost picture perfect with an extraordinary landscape...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, moreover, so, while, i think, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 286.0 206.0 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45804195804 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47726470776 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 127.690721649 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5475735971 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32808617094 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942722238841 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883663100642 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144217378554 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104921917937 0.0580467560999 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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