Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house They have just sent you some holiday photos Write a letter to your friends In your letter thank them for the holiday and the photosexplain why you didn t write ea

Dear John,

I hope you and your family are all well, How have you been? Thank you so much for taking me on the overseas holiday and Holiday photos are captured beautifully. I had a wonderful time, this is one of my memorable trips with you.

Sorry, as soon as I arrived in Bangalore I didn’t contact you because immediately I started a new teaching job. I have been working around the clock. It's been intense but I don’t mean to complain. I have been enjoying it immensely and the school I am working at is our old high school which has been a lot of fun. Do you remember Mohan? He’s is my supervisor.

Furthermore, I have bought a new house near my school. I sincerely invite you to come to visit our home next month if you are free at that point of time.

Best wishes,
Raksha.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I hope you and your famil...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...around the clock. Its been intense but I don’t mean to complain. I have been enjo...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: ITS_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'He is'?
Suggestion: He is
...en a lot of fun. Do you remember Mohan? He’s is my supervisor. Furthermore, I ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 656.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40268456376 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45947287066 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691275167785 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4796498793 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.6666666667 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4166666667 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3068812173 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978691720529 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941034825838 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221045607239 0.12726935374 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11978030605 0.0580467560999 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.35 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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