Last month you has a holiday overseas where you stayed with your friends They have just sent you some of your holidays Write a letter to your friends In your letter Thank them for photo explain why you didn t write earlier invite them to come and stay wit

Essay topics:

Last month you has a holiday overseas where you stayed with your friends. They have just sent you some of your holidays.
Write a letter to your friends
In your letter
Thank them for photo
explain why you didn't write earlier
invite them to come and stay with you.

Dear John and Nicole,
I hope you're doing good. I can't express how much we enjoyed with you guys last month and would like to thank you for a memorable holidays in the beautiful city of Leeds, UK and the amazing photographs that you sent me yesterday.
Firstly, Vikas and I are extremely grateful for your incredible hospitality during our recent trip to UK. It was an unforgettable experience to live with natives who helped us to understand the culture and lifestyle of the British people. It was very thoughtful of you to send the pictures of the great time we had and these will be a part of our travel memory wall.
Secondly, I want to apologize for not writing you back earlier. As soon as we landed, we got stuck with our work life since we were absent at our work a lot of work got pending along with many deadlines to met. It was difficult to take even a breather.
Lastly, I would like to invite you to visit India and stay with us, we'll arrange accommodation, travel itinerary and many more fun activities. I just shifted to a spacious four bedroom house in the happening part of the city. It'll be our pleasure to be your host and return the favor in a way. I urge you to consider the visit by the end of this year.
Yours Lovingly,
Anjali.

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Average: 8.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John and Nicole, I hope youre doing good. I cant express ...
^^^
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear John and Nicole, I hope youre doing good. I cant express how much we ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nd Nicole, I hope youre doing good. I cant express how much we enjoyed with you gu...
^^^^
Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'holiday'?
Suggestion: holiday
...would like to thank you for a memorable holidays in the beautiful city of Leeds, UK and ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...just shifted to a spacious four bedroom house in the happening part of the city. Itll...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the end of this year. Yours Lovingly, Anjali.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38888888889 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49414904486 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628205128205 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9324988146 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283593744413 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919907829963 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727545780295 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129839821402 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100455233567 0.0580467560999 173% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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