Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane.
Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain:
where and when you lost your bag
what your bag looks like
what its contents were
Dear Canadian Airline Service,
My name is Emil Jukovski and last Wednesday I flew from London to Vancouver by the night fly at 11 pm of Canadian airlines. My Identification Number is 10111111 and my flight number was CAN22022.
I was very surprised, and to be honest a little bit shocked, when I arrived home and suddenly discovered that I had left my hand luggage on the plane. I remember this because when I had caught the taxi at the airport of Vancouver I was only with my big plane luggage and without the hand luggage at all.
My hand luggage looks like a small-medium troll on 4 stainless steel wheels, black color with a Canadian flag in the middle of the troll, and in addition on the corner it was a small logo of the manufacture company of this troll. The troll was not from the soft material, it looks like Carbon hard bag.
This luggage is very important for me, because it contains a very expensive things like my laptop, my mobile phone, a very interesting book and in particular it contains my personal documents.
Please assist me in this situation.
Thanks in advance!
Best Regards,
Emil Jukovski
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- Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane.Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain:where and when you lost your bagwhat your bag looks 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Canadian Airline Service, My name i...
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Line 9, column 42, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... was very surprised, and to be honest a little bit shocked, when I arrived home and sudden...
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Line 29, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ance! Best Regards, Emil Jukovski
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, in addition, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.775 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63391343821 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0135016622 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.111111111 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0967310270804 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437708443 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482196559932 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0415269158156 0.12726935374 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500036305034 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.