Dear James,
I hope you and your family are well. I just read your email regarding the difficulty you are facing at your work place recently. Firstly, I am glad that you chose me to discuss your problem with as it explicitly shows your true faith in me.
Secondly, I can assure you that this matter will be resolved swiftly, if you follow my advice completely because I had experienced a same issue at work last year. We have twenty four hours of shift in hospital and we are two doctors on the floor with one duty mobile. But my colleague always used to get eloped from the hospital after giving me the phone and I had to see all the patients which was quite unfair and exhausting.
Later, I came up with an idea of dividing the time, so, it was decided to keep the phone for twelve hours by each of us. Thus, the conflict was resolved feasibly. Since, you are also a doctor, it is comprehensible that you must be having the same problems.
In light of this, I advise you to assimilate the notion of diving hours with your peer doctor to solve this matter. I hope, my suggestion will be helpful to you.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-four
...a same issue at work last year. We have twenty four hours of shift in hospital and we are t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43127962085 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35048156655 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649289099526 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3893868231 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9166666667 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276273242994 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104814600301 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755633744008 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160248968679 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850947204029 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.