Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to you with regards to the joining letter I received today which states that my joining date is 15th November. But I will have to tell you woefully that it will not be possible for me due to an inevitable event that I must attend in my family.
Allow me to elaborate the situation for you, the issue is that my elder sister Tanya is getting married on the same day and being her only brother, it is my responsibility to be with her on that special occasion indeed, I will not miss it for the world.
Although, I do comprehend that it will be difficult to manage the work at office. Therefore, I have come up with a solution which will be convenient for the company as well as for me. I would suggest you to permit me to join on 1st November so that I can do most of the work in advance plus it will be feasible for me to get familiar with the type of work and I will be able to do the remaining assignments after coming back swiftly. I believe, this will resolve this matter.
I sincerely apologize for the trouble and would be grateful if you could accept my proposal.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d, I will not miss it for the world. Although, I do comprehend that it will be diffic...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ieve, this will resolve this matter. I sincerely apologize for the trouble and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29493087558 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46508029623 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557603686636 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.0254086665 44.8134815571 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.555555556 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206981053613 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940049244934 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425248374117 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121202416689 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365845829507 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.