Letter to new employee start job next month with you at office .
* detail about office
* details about first day
* what to bring to office
Dear Mr.Jorge,
I am writing this letter to give you a brief introduction about our company working process. Since you are going to join here as a fresher. I believe that these facts would be really important for you.
Let me explain in more detail. As you are already aware about your joining date, I would like you to explain the company culture, working hours, dress code etc. Atilasia technogies is a one of the best places to work in USA. We don’t maintain any record related to your attendance. Working hours are flexible. You will be given an introduction programme on your first day by our Human resources team .they will make you aware about all the details which are related to company. You do not need to bring any computer equipment as we provide the to all our employees.
In addition to that, you will be assigned to “Abc project” from the first day onwards. But training and knowledge transferring sessions will be conducted by our team leader. These are the main things which you should know about our company. If you have any question, do not hesitate to ask from me.
Looking forward to see you Monday.
Your Sincerely,
Rekha Ferdasanz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Jorge
Dear Mr.Jorge, I am writing this letter to give you ...
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Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ur first day by our Human resources team .they will make you aware about all the d...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...sitate to ask from me. Looking forward to see you Monday. Your Sincerely, Rekha Fer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77450980392 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55944324251 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6328895383 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.875 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.75 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166596527762 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505201321276 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458938892634 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988002258511 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388454198258 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.