Letter: You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
〈 Describe the situation
〈 Explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
〈 Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir/Madam,
The purpose of writing this letter to inform you about my accommodation in the college and room no is 303.
To begin with, I am doing first year course and would like to explain my situation of the stay with another student. Initially, it went well without any issues with a roommate. Later i felt worse about his behavior.
Moreover, I faced so many problems because of him. such as, he is switched on the light for long hours during the night and it leads to health circumstances to me. I keep on saying to turn off the lamp before 10 pm still no luck. Due to these problems, I could not score high marks on my exams.
consequently, I would prefer to stay in the corner room which has a peaceful environment and seeking a mate who is studious and innocent.
your support in this matter is greatly appreciated. Furthermore, an open line of communication, from your side, in this case, would greatly help out.
your sincerely,
Aarthi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, The purpose of writing this letter to in...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...y accommodation in the college and room no is 303. To begin with, I am doing ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...thout any issues with a roommate. Later i felt worse about his behavior. Mo...
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Suggestion: Such
... faced so many problems because of him. such as, he is switched on the light for lon...
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Suggestion: Consequently
...d not score high marks on my exams. consequently, I would prefer to stay in the corner r...
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...ng a mate who is studious and innocent. your support in this matter is greatly a...
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...te who is studious and innocent. your support in this matter is greatly appre...
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...his case, would greatly help out. your sincerely, Aarthi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, moreover, so, still, well, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73684210526 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68701836859 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707602339181 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2912600436 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195773085028 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511520587767 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762867587662 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10567255863 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109715777508 0.0580467560999 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.