Social media has replaced the traditional methods of communicating, and people use more and more social media to communicate, and to follow news and events. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? (March – 2018)
In recent years because of technology growth and advent of cellphones and internet people's are able to communicate much faster and easier. However, for the same in olden days they used letters or telegrams for their mode of communication. Nowadays people started using social media to communicate, follow news and events. In my point of view social media has a lot and better advantages rather than the other way around.
To start with internet. What is internet,social media?. nowadays people started feeling like they got impaired if there's no internet on their hand. All social media revolves around the earth with help of internet. Recent communication methods like cellphone,social media are very effective means of communicating with each other lively. For instance people living on miles away can able to see each other over phone with a fraction of minutes. Moreover it's allowing people to explore more by looking over their friend's profile about the places they visited and pros and cons about the trip. However, this kind of information will be helpful for other to plan it accordingly. We can't obtain this kind of benefits without the help of social media.
In spite of that there are may have some disadvantages of using the social media. Primary point to highlight over here is about privacy. Nowadays this social media sits on top of people's head as radar and being monitored by others. Secondly everyone is in habitat of interacting with devices rather than humans. For example office goers working in office and post they concerned about checking the social media rather than spending time with their families /kids. The above said factors will create anger,depression and attitude issues on our future buds too. because parents are the role model for the kids.
In conclusion, Just like coin has two sides. social media has both merits and demerits on its own. In my point of view i strongly believe that it has more advantages than vice versa.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in spite of, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00917431193 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5967354694 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584097859327 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5480920493 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2173913043 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2173913043 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.34782608696 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293326375524 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874784338195 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104494648634 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189291438921 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463935719899 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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