The line graph illustrates the data on the number of passengers in the London Underground Station from 6:00 AM till 10:00 PM. Overall, the number of passengers is unstable and the highest number of people use the underground stations of London at 8:00 AM

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The line graph illustrates the data on the number of passengers in the London Underground Station from 6:00 AM till 10:00 PM. Overall, the number of passengers is unstable and the highest number of people use the underground stations of London at 8:00 AM and 6:00 PM.

The line graph illustrates the data on the number of passengers in the London Underground Station from 6:00 AM till 10:00 PM. Overall, the number of passengers is unstable and the highest number of people use the underground stations of London at 8:00 AM and 6:00 PM.

As it can be observed, around 100 underground passengers can be found at the underground stations at 6:00 AM and the number increases dramatically and reaches the pinnacle of 400 at 8:00 in the morning. However, the number begins to decline steadily until 10:00 AM when it reaches around 180. The number keeps fluctuating until 4:00 PM and the average number of passengers is estimated to be approximately 200 during this period. After 4:00 PM displays a sizable rise in the number of passengers and the number attains 380 people around 6:00 PM. After the peak hour, the number begins to have a rapid and considerable fall and with some oscillations until 10:00 PM.

In summary, the highest number of passengers use London underground stations bears a strong resemblance to the time a majority of people going and leaving the office.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89893617021 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7782613004 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 127.690721649 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462765957447 0.622605031667 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.2836549201 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.125 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.778789967144 0.216113520407 360% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.418317354215 0.0766984524023 545% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.252001596566 0.0603063233224 418% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.59555719786 0.12726935374 468% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.284393546862 0.0580467560999 490% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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