Dear Mr. Smith,
This letter is regarding my nomination for an upcoming international day event which is being held on 18th August at your college. I would like to present certain useful aspects of my nation that could benefit many students.
As part of my speech, I would mainly cover two topics, including diverse culture and irresistible history of my country. India is known for numerous historic places which are either linked to various contentious wars or luxurious lifestyles of many kings. Availability of these monuments unites people who are from different cultures, religions and traditions.
Since tourism in India is entirely based on these areas, it offers a plethora of opportunities to the young generation. Consequently, knowledge about this country can open doors to obtaining many jobs. Besides, awareness could essentially create curiosity to comprehend or explore this culture.
It would be much appreciated if you can arrange a projector to display a visual representation of famous historical places like Taj Mahal and Golden Temple so that students can get the context and appreciate the beauty of these places.
I hope my request to speak about India would be considered.
Yours sincerely,
Pardeep Kumar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41025641026 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91683544172 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.723076923077 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6597791462 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9090909091 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142634290555 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465263726434 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398599441853 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734086751802 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283004323519 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 7.59969072165 133% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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