Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am the responsible citizen of B-1 society and I am writing to you to express my intense dissatisfaction about the construction of block of flats on the park opposite my residence. I came to know about this lamentable news through our local T.V news channel.
To begin with, all the residents of this society are absolutely against this construction due to several legitimate reasons. Firstly, this is the only park in the whole society and it is the soul of it as it is a playground for children to play games like cricket, hockey and football etc. Also, adults come here for jogging and exercising which is pivotal for their good health. Moreover, old age people like me visit there to meet friends and relax by spending quality time with them while enjoying the beauty of nature.
Therefore, we have decided to protest against this by picketing on main road on coming Monday. So, I want you to convey this message to all residents through your newspaper in order to get maximum support.
Looking for prompt action from your end.
Yours sincerely,
James
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Dear sir, I am writing this…
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the construction of new building in the park side.
I am living in this society form last 15 years and there is only one park in this society. I have read in the newspaper about the construction of new building on park space. All people of this area come in this park. Old age people come to spend free time and children also play various games. Apart from this, if any one get free time for jogging and exercise than they also come here to do this in the beauty of nature.
As I have heard about this I felt very bad and all the people who are residing their are against it and protesting this building construction. I suggest that this building should be established somewhere else looking into consideration the attachment of people with this park.
I hope you will look into this matter.
Yours faithfully
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83957219251 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60761954977 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673796791444 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7034815075 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179814628748 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061585943899 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465591289134 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100190225725 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684342083696 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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