A local newspaper has conducted a competition recently to find a person who contributed to most to the society. Write a letter to the Editor with recommendation for suitable person.
- Who the person is.
-How you know the person.
- Whon he/she helped the community.
-Why you think person could with the the competation.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to propose a name of individual involvement in your clean and green city scheme by your newspaper.His name is Firoz Poonawala and he is an activist, social worked and much know a business person.He and I live in same neighbourhood in south-east part of city. Mostly , I spend my time with his social activities near to our community on weekends.
First thing, I would like to express about several activities he has initiated and supported green and clean city mission.He has created and posted much more signboards around city roads, junctions and at public places about awareness of cleaning and hygiene. additional, As he is a businessman, he personally funded some amount in buying cleaning equipments like a swipper machine, PET bottle recycling machine and recycle-waste trucks. However, he is funding different cleaning event across the other part of city.
I think his significant and substantial involvement to wards this scheme has changed our neighbourhood into paradise. Our parks and play grounds are now changed to picnic and most visited place in the city. People from other neighbourhood for taking lessens and advice from him. His valuable work to wards this scheme made him a winning person for your assessment. I surely hope you will consider his entry to your scheme. Thank you.
Your's faithfully,
ABC
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...rhood in south-east part of city. Mostly , I spend my time with his social activit...
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...ies near to our community on weekends. First thing, I would like to expr...
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...bout awareness of cleaning and hygiene. additional, As he is a businessman, he personally ...
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...g event across the other part of city. I think his significant and subst...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86169637314 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648888888889 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.6208292715 44.8134815571 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.545454545 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134766945438 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459958642907 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414415478414 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924628124233 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221444539097 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 8.62886597938 226% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.