The diagrams shows the basic layout and transportation information of Garlsdon Town and illustrate two alternatives places for a new supermarket.
The most apparent difference between two of them is that one are located in the town center, while the other are placed in the countryside. However, both of them are adjacent to the railway and main roads.
As a small town with a population of 6500, Garlsdon owns a typical multi-circle layout. The outer layer from center are used for industry when housing areas are concentrated in two parts of north region and south region. S2 are surrounded by a large number of industry factories and may be effected by pollution, while S1 have the advantage of countryside, beautiful views, fresh air and cheap land price.
The railway crossed the center from north-west to south-east. Besides, there are three main roads connecting Garlsdon with three other smaller towns. The north-west road are 12km away from Hindon with 10,000 people. You can drive 25km southesast to Cransdon, a village with 29,000 citizens. Finally, Bransdon are located 16km away in the south-west of Garlsdon, owning 15000 people. Because of the center location, S2 can reach more customers than S1, while people can find parking lots and stay away from traffic congestion more easily if they visit S1.
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- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for commiting it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'show'.
Suggestion: show
The diagrams shows the basic layout and transportation inf...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... and south region. S2 are surrounded by a large number of industry factories and may be effected ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, however, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13425925926 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7162593739 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.716220533 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4166666667 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14507799171 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556122639475 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884883242966 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127779571986 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119462551261 0.0580467560999 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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