Most people agree that money cannot buy happiness.Why is happiness difficult to define? How can people achieve happiness?
In the modern era, people often struggle and do arduous work to earn under the pretext that they could be happy when they are wealthy. However, it is generally believed that happiness cannot be bought. In this essay, I shall discuss the reasons behind the challenges to finding joy and optimum ways to achieve it.
To begin with, nowadays, social media has influenced the population of every age group throughout the world. What is being shown to the public is not always reality. For example, the celebrities post their extravagance lifestyle which misleads their audience and makes them believe that contentment lies in the affluent class. Therefore, the misconception of finding pleasure in materialistic things and exorbitant gadgets such as expensive cars, watches, and mobile phones, is prevalent among mankind.
Despite the fallacious predictions of gaining satisfaction, empirical observation shows that each individual can find happiness in little joyful moments of their life. Such pleasurable moments must be cherished without comparing one's own life with that of others. Moreover, the overthinking regarding futuristic events and being stuck in memories should be avoided and the present moment should be enjoyed to the fullest. To exemplify, a recent study in psychological science shows that the incompetence to move on and being happy in current times is the major cause of depression among youth. Seen in this light, gratification could be achieved by living in the present.
Having seen the above points, it can be concluded that the popular belief of chasing wealth and monetary success is the reason behind the misconception of finding contentment. Instead, appreciating what you possess and enjoying the simple moments would be much more fulfilling.
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| 2020-08-05 | Jaskaran Kaur | 89 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.48453608247 240% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 937.175257732 160% => OK
No of words: 277.0 206.0 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42960288809 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85586264823 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 127.690721649 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660649819495 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 290.88556701 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1585411574 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123434813413 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439183807127 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600639961777 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750914393033 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765206273942 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 8.71597938144 163% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 41.2886597938 216% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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