A motorway is ro be built near your house.as you think that will destroy areas of natural beauty.
Write a letter to the local authorities. In your letter:
•express your views
•explain what damage will be caused
•suggesst alternative routes
Writing task 1 , general training
Dear Mayor
I am writing to express my protest on be half of every one in our neighborhood about project of constructing a motorway.
As you know our neighborhood is very popular among people becauss of its fantastic recreational places and worthful park with old trees. Unfortunately I have read an editorial in the local newspaper which have explained a major part of the park will be destroyed because if this new project.
Building the motorway will cause immense turbulence and pollution which are harmful for everybody especially children and old people.furthermore, this locality would confront other dramatic issues such as noise pollution and traffic which is explicit and inevitable.
I wonder if you could help us and reflect my letter to the authorities maybe they could replace the project to the other place which is more suitable.
In anticipation of hearing good news from you.
Your sincerely,
G.Hadjar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 14, column 3, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hadjar
...od news from you. Your sincerely, G.Hadjar
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30872483221 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05576299663 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.718120805369 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2947641307 44.8134815571 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17958295125 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765524368935 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454652374759 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693311079401 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251873857016 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 8.71597938144 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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