Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to you in response to the advert that you had given in the daily newspaper last Saturday regarding an opening for a part-time job in the National Museum. I would like to apply for the post of sculpture maintenance staff as I have been looking for a part-time job in order to support my family financially to pay my education loan.
I will request you to consider me for this job as not only because I have the required knowledge regarding the historical architectures and sculptures which is displayed in the museum, but also I understand the methodology of maintaining these valuable sculptures. Although this job is to support my family, this will be an added benefit to my education as I am specializing in this topic in my final year of degree.
If you consider me for this job, kindly assign me the evening schedule as I have to go college in the morning. I am also willing to work on weekends unless I have exams scheduled.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Ms Sruthy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...inancially to pay my education loan. I will request you to consider me for thi...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ich is displayed in the museum, but also I understand the methodology of maintain...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62962962963 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82207560976 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582010582011 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.661827013 44.8134815571 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.375 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187714529492 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853628586724 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525043793453 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112941704673 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682729499593 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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