A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary! unpaid work You would like to do some voluntary unpaid work at the museum.
Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary unpaid work, In your letter
• explain why you want to do voluntary unpaid work at the museum
• describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful
• give details of when you would be available for work
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to support the museum by doing some voluntary work during my leisure time. As I am living just on the opposite side of the place, It would be very convenient for me to come and work there. I really love to involve in this type of work because it gives an opportunity to use my skills productively.
I am a well-organised person and retired military personnel. Therefore, I can easily help to do any type of work required. Especially, I have a keen knowledge of world war one and two as well. Probably, I can help to organize the museum library. Additionally, any type of labour-intensive work is fine with me because I am still extremely fit and I do can handle things delicately.
Since I am at home all this time, I will be available anytime you need. Importantly, I can provide my truck for any type of transportation requirement which may incur.
I am looking forward to a favourable reply.
Yours faithfully,
Jack London
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'well' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'wells'.
Suggestion: wells
...n knowledge of world war one and two as well. Probably, I can help to organize the m...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, really, so, still, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64161849711 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05745925049 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653179190751 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0425335449 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9166666667 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245779343297 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792544837534 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785289521213 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121704544535 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866826576178 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'well' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'wells'.
Suggestion: wells
...n knowledge of world war one and two as well. Probably, I can help to organize the m...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, really, so, still, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64161849711 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05745925049 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653179190751 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0425335449 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9166666667 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245779343297 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792544837534 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785289521213 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121704544535 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866826576178 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.