my dream

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a veterinarian' or simply 'Veterinarians'?
Suggestion: a veterinarian; Veterinarians
My dream is to become a Veterinarians. Ever since I was a child, I have a spe...
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Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...I have a special affection for animals. i want to take care of and be with animal...
^
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...I have a special affection for animals. i want to take care of and be with animal...
^
Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...imals. It makes me feel good. I always try and fulfill my dreams. I took the first ste...
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Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...irst steps along the way to that dream. I entered veterinary medicine at Can Tho ...
^
Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t Can Tho University and was a student. I have learned a lot of knowledge about a...
^
Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nimals and how to take care of animals. I was excited to learn about it, it was r...
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Line 2, column 318, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s really interesting and fascinated me. I think I can realize my dream in the nea...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Not
... is highly respected anytime, anywhere. not only domestically but also abroad. Vete...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, really, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 676.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30573248408 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74361902101 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605095541401 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 16.3608247423 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.6580034771 44.8134815571 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 42.25 76.5299724578 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.8125 16.8248392259 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.3125 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296558472007 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102446517524 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173752258286 0.0603063233224 288% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163510012324 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983698299664 0.0580467560999 169% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.8 8.37731958763 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.8 70.7449484536 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.24 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 8.54432989691 66% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.