Neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.
Dear Mr. Wilson
Greetings of the day!
I am writing this letter to apologize for the inconvenience caused to you by the noise which was coming from my house. I can understand your situation and believe that we should have been more considerate.
I am guessing that you were troubled by the sound of loud music that was being played at my home last Monday evening. Actually it was my daughter's birthday on that day and her friends insisted on playing some rock music. I am afraid that the music was too loud for you. I can imagine what you had to go through as you have an ailing grand father living with you. I deeply regret the ignorance and carelessness showed by me and my family.
I really appreciate that instead of calling authorities you chose write to me about the issue. we shall definitely be very carefull in future. I and family wish a very speedy recovery for your grand father.
Yours sincerely,
Regina Jacobs
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Mr. Wilson Greetings of the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Greetings of the day! I am writing this letter to apologize fo...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...we should have been more considerate. I am guessing th...
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Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...derate. I am guessing that you were troubled by t...
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Line 7, column 388, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...an ailing grand father living with you. I deeply regret the ignorance and careles...
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Line 7, column 463, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arelessness showed by me and my family. I really appreci...
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Line 9, column 25, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...my family. I really appreciate that instead of calli...
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Line 9, column 91, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to write'
Suggestion: to write
...nstead of calling authorities you chose write to me about the issue. we shall definit...
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Line 9, column 120, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... you chose write to me about the issue. we shall definitely be very carefull in fu...
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Line 9, column 157, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...e. we shall definitely be very carefull in future. I and family wish a very speedy recove...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r. Yours sincerely, Regina Jacobs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, really, so, as to, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67664670659 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49998386455 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676646706587 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2917446186 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175606846122 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607856965542 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469965466264 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874084315768 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587428771393 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.