now you do voluntary work for local community but you are unable to continue doing this job write your manager of this location

Dear Mr. ABC,
I am a volunteer of your Rajguru Nagar Local Community Services. I am doing this job for the last 2 years. I am quiet happy with my work and enjoy it the most. Unfortunately, I am unable to continue this job further because of some personal reasons which I will explain to you.
Nowadays my college has started as I am on a regular full time undergraduate course for 3 years. so, it is not going to be possible for me to continue doing this work with full dedication and conviction. As I have to complete my bachelors with good grades so that I can get admission in excellent academic colleges for my masters. I know this voluntary work requires my time but I will not be available from now on. I am happy to be a part of this noble work and will always be supportive of it. I will try to ensure my replacement for this so that this great cause will still go on strongly as earlier.
I hope you understand my position and accept my unavailability and sorry for the inconvenience.
Thanks
Yours sincerely,
XYZ

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ollege has started as I am on a regular full time undergraduate course for 3 years. so, i...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... time undergraduate course for 3 years. so, it is not going to be possible for me ...
^^
Line 3, column 496, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rk and will always be supportive of it. I will try to ensure my replacement for t...
^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... will still go on strongly as earlier. I hope you understand my position and acc...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.375 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79252163525 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9802375192 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326833642244 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123724861245 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868061079223 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208659467877 0.12726935374 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961063694623 0.0580467560999 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.