Nowadays people are moving to other countries for work. Some people say that it is difficult for children lives, others think that its better for them. Discuss both views and Give your opinion.
Migration from one country to another to find employment opportunities becoming more common nowadays. This trend mostly affects the children, some people believe it is not straightforward for them, while other take it as productive effort for their future. I will discuss both the views in the upcoming paragraphs along with my opinion.
To begin with, moving another country, opponents of this idea, take it as a barrier between young ones and their cultural roots because there is difficulty to learn about their own country's history and culture. Consequently, they remain isolate from their culture. Because of excess migration workforce will reduce and results into lack of development of emigrants' nation. For instance, a survey conducted in 2016, reveals that host countries are becoming 25% more rich due to enough work force, conversely, visitors' countries following crisis in finances and other fields. Furthermore, they can suffer from loneliness and homesickness, language barriers can also occur for fresh migrants.
On the flip side, proponents says it is beneficial for youngsters because they can explore different nations and can become multilingual and multicultural. While living in another country, provide various chances to gain more knowledge regarding their culture and language as well. Moreover, they can get more experience and heavy pocketed salary, which will strengthen their future.
In my opinion, I pen down saying that people should explore world and get employment in another country have more merits than it's demerits because it is fruitful in all the ways.
To conclude, moving another country is beneficial for children if they of lack of opportunities in their own country, otherwise home country is best place to spend their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, conversely, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, while, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 937.175257732 162% => OK
No of words: 276.0 206.0 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48550724638 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77812327194 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 127.690721649 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615942028986 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 290.88556701 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1160101324 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.461538462 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 4.34317383033 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24526963811 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820678255643 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876859967014 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148219633365 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876193143669 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 8.37731958763 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 8.71597938144 167% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 41.2886597938 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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