One of your colleagues is leaving for a new job, your manager has asked you to arrange a leaving party for him.
Write a letter to your manager and
•Suggest a suitable day and time for the party
•Recommend a place
•Discuss about the food and entertainment options available
Dear Mr Markas,
I am writing in connection with the arrangements for the farewell party for our most honourable member of our team named Mr Julian Smith.
As you know, Mr Smith is leaving Earnest and Young from the position of Manager Finance and his last day in the office will be 31st May 2020. So, I reckon that on the evening of 29th May 2020 would be the best day to throw the party for him. Wouldn’t it be?
I vividly remember that he met you at the Hyatt Hotel, Sydney, during the BRIC conference and you were impressed by his achievements. Consequently, you offered him this position in our organization and he accepted. Owing to this fact, I believe that this event would become special to him if we can do arrangements in the same hotel.
Furthermore, I have also confirmed from the hotel authorities about the buffet plans and they are ready for the theme party in which they will serve us Cocktails, Mocktails with more than 50 types of cuisines. Besides this delicious cake cutting ceremony will also be arranged. As we have just 2 days left, venue authorities requested to confirm the booking on or before 25th May 2020 to make the necessary arrangements.
I hope you would like my opinion and I look forward to getting a positive response.
Yours Sincerely
Tom Smith
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|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-05-28 | Kulpreet Kaur | 95 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, furthermore, if, look, may, so, well, i reckon, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70742358079 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64458705608 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650655021834 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9141731696 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8333333333 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208838374668 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646607278223 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054603387058 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961898503382 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597778776418 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.