One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business.
Write a letter to reply friend's offer. In your letter
*Give your opinion of your friend's offer business idea
*Tell him whether or not you have decided to accept his offer
*and explain your reasons for this decision
Dear XYZ,
I am glad to hear from you after a long time and surprised that you are interested in making me as a partner in your new business.
The Business idea you have is a good one and a lucrative business in the near future, as online library is the one which are found very rarely. In fact, this is an innovative idea where enormous people who are willing to read variety of books, but were finding hard to reach library can order books online.
I am certainly interested in joining hands with you and be a part of this wonderful business venture. I can spend ample time from next month onwards as I am free for most of the time.
As I know you from so many years and your successful business ventures in the past, I am pretty sure that you have meticulously planned about this business too and the other reason is I always wanted to be a part of your business, although it was my hidden desire.
I am glad you consider me good enough to be your partner and let’s hope to make this business a successful one.
Regards,
ABX
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'rarely' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...library is the one which are found very rarely. In fact, this is an innovative idea wh...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37244897959 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38375624507 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576530612245 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4619105496 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.428571429 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 16.8248392259 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236557805418 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994529334794 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839687845193 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145911227854 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659650282901 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.