One of your friends lives in another country You want to spend some time working in that country Write a letter to your friend In your letter you should describe why you want to work in that country tell him her about your skills and experience ask some q

Dear Shamita,
How you doing? I hope this letter will find you in best of health. I am writing this letter to let you know that I have decided to explore work opportunities in Canada. Furthermore, have heard a lot about Canada from you and other source and to my surprise, I am fascinated by the social richness and work culture.
Let me share my background in detail, I am working as a software developer in multinational company. In my four years of work experience, I have learned various kinds of technologies. However, I am expertise in Mobile development, both IOS and android. Which is in demand nowadays in IT industry. Also, I aspire to get a lead role in my present assignment as I am working in end to end project delivery.
Additionally, could you please help to find a suitable job. Please share insight about the job market, portal and hiring process. Moreover, I have a few concerns regarding remuneration and standard working hours. If possible, Could you get some data regarding the pay-package of software developer in Canada? Also, the working hours and what other perks and fringe benefits offered by the company in Canada.

Looking forward to hearing from you .

Your friend,
Preeti Rai

Votes
Average: 7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Shamita, How are you doing? I hope this letter wi...
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...bile development, both IOS and android. Which is in demand nowadays in IT industry. A...
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... a lead role in my present assignment as I am working in end to end project deliv...
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...are insight about the job market, portal and hiring process. Moreover, I have a f...
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...and standard working hours. If possible, Could you get some data regarding the pa...
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.... Looking forward to hearing from you . Your friend, Preeti Rai
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...rd to hearing from you . Your friend, Preeti Rai
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... from you . Your friend, Preeti Rai
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86602870813 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85492374139 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602870813397 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4719617279 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5625 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0625 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220714230652 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715311539306 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578781781805 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110307422357 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546988136055 0.0580467560999 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.