Parents of your close friend are coming to your area for a visit. He/she asked you to suggest some places for older people to visit. Write a letter to your friend and include the following:
– Suggest some places his/her parents could visit.
– Recommend a place for them to stay.
– Give some other ideas for their visit.
Dear James,
Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I felt deliriously happy when I received your letter that your parents are arriving in my city of Patiala. Let me elaborate in details.
Elucidating in detail, My city is well-known for its renowned Maharaja Ranjeet Singh who won many battles over the enemies. The city had its history monuments and ostentatious houses of former queens and kings as a main attraction. Moreover, the petite and cozy shopping markets is well-known as Main Bazaar. Hence, your parents can walk around it and cherish the day with stall markets of Indian dishes such as Samoa, kulcha chola and so on.
Secondly, If they are in need of anything I will be available for them around the clockwise. Well your parents can share with us . We have a joint family and love to share our place with your mother and father. Most probably, my parents will be affectionate towards your parents while their stay. You know when oldies met with another oldies.
Lastly, there is a traditional temple of "kalimata mandir" goddess a thousands of people visit this place regularly. For your astonisment to know even the Film stars had also visit this place while making their movie in our city.
I am waiting for them as well as give me also their itinerary details so I can accommodate them.
Best regards,
Sunny.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ise. Well your parents can share with us . We have a joint family and love to shar...
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Line 17, column 78, Rule ID: A_HUNDREDS[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'a thousand'
Suggestion: a thousand
... of 'kalimata mandir' goddess a thousands of people visit this place regularly. F...
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Line 17, column 78, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a thousand' or simply 'thousands'?
Suggestion: a thousand; thousands
... of 'kalimata mandir' goddess a thousands of people visit this place regularly. F...
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Line 17, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent to know even the Film stars had also visit this place while making their movi...
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Line 17, column 187, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'visited'.
Suggestion: visited
...t to know even the Film stars had also visit this place while making their movie in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, such as, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93220338983 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56626123702 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.045695396 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.75 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244155412716 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699356969766 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637509498266 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126684579482 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677587929277 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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