For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership.
state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this.
give details on how you have benefited from the club.
explain why you want to leave.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing the letter in regards to withdrawing my annual membership at your club. I had paid 10,000/- rupees in cash for premium membership on 1st of January 2018.
Being a member of your club has benefited me in numerous ways. The swimming pool facility has helped me unwind on daily basis after work and even improved my swimming skills. Moreover, the monthly gathering of club members has helped me meet people from different walks of life and improve my social skills. In addition, free buffet on weekends has been the cherry on the top for making my weekends memorable. I would like to take this opportunity to thank you for all the amazing facilities and top of the class services.
As I am moving to a new city for work, it will not be possible and viable for me to a part of your club. Hence, I would like to withdraw my membership and apply for the refund and deposit amount.
Please do the needful at the earliest.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Sam Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... Sir/ Madam, I am writing the letter in regards to withdrawing my annual membership at you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63186813187 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46235391713 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626373626374 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6455172844 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.25 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189269028685 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621873502266 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437111784487 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806062718437 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554240901409 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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