For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership.
Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter
• state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this
• give details on how you have benefited from the club
• explain why you want to leave
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Secretary,
I am John Gresham residing at 5th avenue, Himayatnagar. I have been a member of the community welfare club since 2010. I am writing this letter to withdraw my membership with the club.
I am a platinum member of the club. When we moved into the colony back in 2010, I opted for a bronze membership and as years progressed, I upgraded my membership to the platinum sector last month.
It was a great privilege to be a part of the club. My family and I have been extremely delighted with the facilities offered at the club and benefits derived. The library was well equipped with state of the art facilities combined with requisite books for all age groups which helped my 7 years old kid in his studies. Also, the fitness center which operates until 10 PM in the night was an added advantage to us as we could workout to balance our exercises after coming back from work.
My organisation has elevated me to a leadership position and entrusted with the responsibility to setup their branch office in Delhi. Since, I would be relocating myself and my family to Delhi next week, I request you to refund me the amount paid for the platinum membership. Please, let me know if there is an application to fill in to cancel the membership. You can reach out to me at any time.
Thanks for your cooperation in advance. Looking forward to your reply.
Thank You
John Gresham
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the community welfare club since 2010. I am writing this letter to withdraw my m...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ithdraw my membership with the club. I am a platinum member of the club. When ...
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Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...ved. The library was well equipped with state of the art facilities combined with requisite book...
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Line 9, column 96, Rule ID: CAN_SETUP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to set up'?
Suggestion: to set up
...n and entrusted with the responsibility to setup their branch office in Delhi. Since, I ...
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Line 15, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our reply. Thank You John Gresham
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64658634538 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68723019289 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606425702811 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9455954014 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3125 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5625 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8125 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278692156465 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896734719792 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580013930174 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130497544994 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319957618288 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.