The pie chart shows the popularity of different takeaways food in the UK
The pie chart shows the popularity of different takeaways food in the UK, while the bar chart shows the increasing number of Indian restaurants between 1960 and 2015. Overall, Chinese and Indian foods are the most popular takeaway in the UK, and the number of Indian restaurant rose steadily during these years.
The pie chart shows that Chinese food is the most favorite takeaway with 34%. Indian food is in the second place with 26%. After these two popular takeaways, Italian food accounts for 10% of favorite takeaways in the UK. British food, with 9%, is three times more popular than Thai food. Greek, Japanese and Mexican foods are the least favorite takeaways with 1%.
Having said that, Indian food is the second most popular take away in the UK. The bar chart shows the number of Indian restaurant increased during this period, from 500 restaurant in 1960 to almost over 9000 restaurant in 2015.The greatest increase was in 1990,about 3000 restaurant during 7 years. The highest number of Indian restaurant is in 2009.Since 2011, the number has not changed much.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... the least favorite takeaways with 1%. Having said that, Indian food is the sec...
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... number of Indian restaurant is in 2009.Since 2011, the number has not changed much.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, while, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93922651934 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31945519665 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508287292818 0.622605031667 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3116945735 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46037381541 0.216113520407 213% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213323217759 0.0766984524023 278% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172726658783 0.0603063233224 286% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351378112162 0.12726935374 276% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172719885668 0.0580467560999 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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