Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in (Many subjects)
the present day.
The two map illustrate the degree to which a health care has changed from 2005 to now.
Overall, the center has become dramatically larger and the layout has been changed.
As can be seen from the picture, from the house center ,the office has remained intact but smaller than in the past, minor operations has been built next to the physiotherapy room. The waiting room were arranged two lines for office with three consulting rooms but consulting room one, consulting two, consulting three have been reduced the size and added consulting four and four rooms have been built side by side .The reception desk has been relocated to near the entrance, the establishment of children’s playing area has been on the bottom left-handed corner. Seats have been widened .Entrance was to the South now relocated to the West.
Outside , the garden has been shrank the area while the car parking expanded spaces to thirty. Barrier was rectangular then paralled to these on the bottom.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... from the picture, from the house center ,the office has remained intact but small...
^^
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... four rooms have been built side by side .The reception desk has been relocated to...
^^
Line 3, column 417, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...our rooms have been built side by side .The reception desk has been relocated to ne...
^^^
Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t-handed corner. Seats have been widened .Entrance was to the South now relocated ...
^^
Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Entrance
...handed corner. Seats have been widened .Entrance was to the South now relocated to the W...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...outh now relocated to the West. Outside , the garden has been shrank the area whi...
^^
Line 4, column 31, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'shrunk', 'shrunken'.
Suggestion: shrunk; shrunken
...he West. Outside , the garden has been shrank the area while the car parking expanded...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 32.9175257732 3% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96341463415 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5169106663 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621951219512 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.963278078 44.8134815571 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0153718174977 0.216113520407 7% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0110824785857 0.0766984524023 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271464176203 0.0603063233224 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.019394337525 0.12726935374 15% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335919779725 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.