Q: You will move to new city for work. You know some people who live there. Write a letter to one of your friends. In your letter
Ask them for help finding accommodation, tell them where you would like to live and tell what type of place you are looking for
Dear Maria,
It was pleasure to get your letter last week as always and I am happy to hear that your father has recuperated from long diseases.
As you know that I was searching for job in New York and would be glad to hear that finally wish came true and I have been offered job in Pacific Insurance Company, having office at Commercial complex, city center. I have given my confirmation to join from 1st May’18. Now I would need help from you or lorna to find the flat for me. I do not want to impose on you or Lorna or Jeffery even for single day. Of course, we will meet quite often and chill on weekends.
I think that area in which you are residing would be ideal for me as well because there are connecting trains to downtown. Moreover, all others transport medium such as cab, bus etc. are also available in anytime. I am looking for one room independent flat which should be preferably furnished as I do not want to transfer my all stuff to New York. Considering rental rates are so high, I would just get bare minimum stuff so that it could fit in small apartment.
If you have any sight of vacant apartment as per my specification or you know any letting agency, please connect me as soon as possible. Look forward to get reply from you.
Best Regards,
Sama
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Maria, It was pleasure to get your letter last ...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to getting'.
Suggestion: to getting
...ct me as soon as possible. Look forward to get reply from you. Best Regards, Sama ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, i think, of course, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37656903766 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4194884017 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640167364017 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4841400395 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7142857143 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259256963236 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790471044411 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707328864118 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14638693074 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526861971501 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.