Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a client of your insurance company and my insurance reference number is A0977. Recently, I lost my cell phone during my holiday in Australia. The mobile phone is a black, model 5s iphone with 16 GB memory. I bought it in April 2014 and lost it last month.
The missing of my iphone happened on December 2016 when I was traveling in Brisbane. I usually put my phone in my shoulder bag; however, I could not find it any more on 29 December 2016. I guess somebody have stolen it from my shoulder bag while I was swimming in the sea.
I am writing to request a refund for my lost cell phone. I bought it for 800 dollars two years ago and it is still in good condition before it was stolen. Thus, I would like a conpensation of 200 dollars for my lost.
I also would like to hear your solution to this matter. Please reply me soon, I am looking forward to resolve the issue soon.
Yours faithfully,
Jim Pan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...e on 29 December 2016. I guess somebody have stolen it from my shoulder bag while I ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...bag while I was swimming in the sea. I am writing to request a refund for my l...
^
Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...equest a refund for my lost cell phone. I bought it for 800 dollars two years ago...
^
Line 9, column 100, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to resolving'.
Suggestion: to resolving
...ase reply me soon, I am looking forward to resolve the issue soon. Yours faithfully, J...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, still, thus, while, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27374301676 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39520864173 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625698324022 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.0633836799 44.8134815571 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.8461538462 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12083006782 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487529351842 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478487397933 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705492867637 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580985874351 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.