On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Dear sir/madam,
I am writing this quick letter to inform you about my loss of a leather bag at airport.
I lost my leather bag from London Heathrow airport while coming back to India on 1st June, 2019. It had a laptop of Dell and its accessories such as charger and mouse. Apart from that it also had my headphones of JBL company.
I landed on Heathrow at 2 pm and waiting for my next flight departing in six hours. I lost my bag during that interval as I opened it for tickets and passport in flight. I search for bag which was lost at that time. Fortunately, my tickets and passport were in my pocket.
I would like to have small favour of searching for my bag at Heathrow airport. It would be ideal if we can get that. However, cheque from the bank covering the cost at all the things including bag would also suffice.
Please keep this on high priority and reply me back as soon as possible. You can contact me on 7012765498 in case of any further information.
Most sincerely,
Jaimin
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-29 | Heenu | 84 | view |
| 2019-12-27 | Baniz | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-23 | PALAK AHUJA | 89 | view |
| 2019-12-05 | shaina_1234 | 61 | view |
| 2019-11-26 | Pavitra Kumari | 78 | view |
- Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.Thank them for the photos and for the holidayExplain why you didn't write earlierInvite them to come and stay with you 73
- Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? 73
- You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter- describe the training course you want to do- explain what the company could do to 73
- A close friend is coming to visit you. S/he has asked you for advice for things to do in your hometown and the surrounding area.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:• Ask for more details about your friend’s plans• Suggest some places to vi 73
- Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'June 2019'.
Suggestion: June 2019
...rport while coming back to India on 1st June, 2019. It had a laptop of Dell and its access...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 171, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... it for tickets and passport in flight. I search for bag which was lost at that t...
^
Line 8, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er information. Most sincerely, Jaimin
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39784946237 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43664075635 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.178653973 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.4285714286 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2857142857 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112489755145 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370919076061 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350278484997 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590763558937 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124176660723 0.0580467560999 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.35 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.