On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
describe the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
DEAR SIR,
I AM WRITING THIS LETTER REGARDING THE LAPTOP BAG WHICH GOT MISPLACED WHILE TRAVELLING BY BUS FROM MUMBAI TO DELHI.
ON, 1ST NOVEMBER I WAS MOVING TO DELHI THROUGH A VOLVO BUS HAVING NUMBERED D3 THAT DEPARTED AT 7:00PM FROM MUMBAI. UNFORTUNATELY, I FORGOT TO TAKE BACK THE SMALL BAG ALONG WITH ME WHICH WAS KEPT JUST ABOVE MY SEAT. I IMMEDIATELY ENQUIRED WITH THE TRAVEL AGENCIES AND THE DRIVER BUT THEY WERE UNABLE TO FIND IT OUT.
THE LUGGAGE CONTAINED A LAPTOP WHICH WAS WORTH RS 50,000 AND WAS BOUGHT ABOUT AN YEAR AGO. IN ADDITION TO THIS, THERE WAS A SMART WATCH OF APPLE COMPANY THAT PRICED RS 20,000 AND WAS JUST A MONTH OLD.
I WOULD LIKE YOU TO CLAIM THE AMOUNT FOR MY MISPLACED BELONGINGS AND ISSUE ME THE REFUND OF IT AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. I WOULD LIKE TO BRING IT TO YOUR NOTICE THE LOST PROPERTIES WERE AMONGST THE BASIC AMENITIES OF MY LIFE AND THEIR MISPLACEMENT HAS CAUSED TROUBLESOME ISSUES. THEREFORE, I BELIEVE YOUR TIMELY ATTENTION FOR THIS MATTER IS NEEDED. I HOPE TO HEAR BACK FROM YOU ON RECEIPT OF THIS MATTER AS THIS CLAIM MUST BE URGENTLY REIMBURSED.
YOURS FAITHFULLY
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5671641791 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46583546611 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65671641791 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.8474946275 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10589248569 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043242122906 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038376115824 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0483831564175 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531887384582 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.