Recently you went to a local restaurant with your family and you were very satisfied with their food and service. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper to tell him/her about it.
Describe the meal you and your family members had and let the editor know
why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to recommend a newly opened restaurant at King's Street, Downtown. My family and I went there to celebrate my 25th birthday. I was exhilarated by the service and food they offered on this occasion. I would like you to write an article for them in our local newspaper.
I was searching on an app called "Just Eat" to organize my birthday party when I saw a recently inaugurated restaurant the Sushi Point and was amazed by the variety of cuisines it is offering. The smokey grilled chicken was tender and juicy, giving tastes of all the spices. Furthermore, the sushi was cooked thoroughly and uniformly which gave its scrumptious flavour. They made a multi-layer cake as my birthday present and, also offered me a hefty discount on my bill.
Would it be possible for you to print their eating area picture? As the ambience was soothing and made us relaxed. Despite of 20 members, we were more than 30 individuals and the manager was able to make the arrangements promptly which made me surprised by their hospitality.In the end, my overall experience was tremendous in terms of the services and food which made me to write a letter to you.
I am waiting to hearing from you soon.
Your's Faithfully
Apoorva Chikara
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| 2019-06-13 | Apoorva Chikara | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...cle for them in our local newspaper. I was searching on an app called 'Ju...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... made me surprised by their hospitality.In the end, my overall experience was trem...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Yours Faithfully Apoorva Chikara
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81447963801 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78086604237 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638009049774 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7842906518 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8461538462 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16325556232 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569698913143 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462426932213 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101715002734 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527032758449 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.