A restaurant has placed an advertisement for a manager in the local newspaper.
Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job.
In your letter:
-- explain what you are currently doing
-- describe your suitability for this job
-- Tell them when you are free to attend an interview
Dear Sir/Madam,
I recently came across the print media an announcement regarding a requirement for a superior position in your cafeteria, I have a desire to join your prestigious firm.
Presently, I am working as a supervisor in a resort, I am assigned there to supervise and guide my subordinates appropriately. In absence of any employees, I used to manage their duties and healthily meet the needs of the customers.
I strongly believe that I will be apt for this post because I hold a master’s degree in hotel management and has a hands-on practice in this field for 8 years. Apart from that, I was awarded as the best leader last month.
You can call me for the recruitment process at any time between 1 pm to 6 pm but, kindly exclude Monday and Friday because those are busy days and my administrator will not be able to relive me on time.
I would be delightedly grateful to you if you would consider me for this position and give me an opportunity to work at your esteemed institution.
Yours Faithfully,
Elizabeth Manickam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ours Faithfully, Elizabeth Manickam.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79234972678 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03416992046 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1889056911 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.625 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21705416543 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809813050715 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677224899971 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905515281272 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686860447093 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.