Governments are often blamed for spending too much money on projects to protect wildlife while ignoring other problems. Some people believe that governments must prioritize the needs of their citizens above all else.
To what extent do you agree?
Administrative bodies are frequently accused for wasting a lot of fund on exploration and research to safeguard wild animals by excluding other issues. A few individuals assume that, the political parties need to systemize such desires before everything else. Therefore, the ruling parties should understand the needs of the public.
A huge chunk of money is being invested for the preservation of wild species, regardless of existing issues with human lives. The current leaders spent too much on the resources to maintain zoos and sanctuaries in distinct cities by expecting financial gains from the tourists. This may lead to disruption with meeting the expectations of common men. Whereas, in developing countries like India there are other valuable necessities to be met in order to provide a quality life to civilians, such as, proper health care system, reduction of polluted hazards and improving of the literacy rate.
Globally, there are several rudimentary issues existing which need to be addressed on priority and in the service of humanity. The funds have to be utilized appropriately by meeting the most accurate demands of the public. As we know, knowledge is a powerful weapon, thereby, it is our leader’s responsibility to provide free education to all children, regardless of caste, creed and religion. This will lead a nation to be more successful in various aspects. For instance, In India, there are huge number of children who are less fortunate to avail basic education in many cities.
In conclusion, before initiating any particular task-based experimentation, it is better to conduct a thorough evaluation on the present scenario of the citizens, hence the wastage of financial resources can be prevented and it can be utilized beneficially by meeting the current urgency of the community and make prosperity for the development of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34121621622 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04971401442 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614864864865 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.8630535048 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.615384615 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.068218442244 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0229706018029 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0162575254059 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0394024183989 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177887159806 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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