The similarities between the internet and television

although a lot of people may believe that television differs from the internet there are some similarity between the internet and television. The first is both the internet and television provide some advertisement. In fact, there are some commercial advertisements on television; similarly, on the internet web pages are designed with some promotions. The second is news. Television broadcasts some news programs at the specific times; likewise, on the internet many pages are provided for news. In fact, both television and the internet provide some materials for the news at their specific ways. The third one is both television and the internet are full with many ideas and information that may be either wrong or informative.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
although a lot of people may believe that televi...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, likewise, may, second, similarly, so, third, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 615.0 937.175257732 66% => OK
No of words: 116.0 206.0 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30172413793 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28181803491 3.78020617076 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95138724713 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 62.0 127.690721649 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 200.7 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8406560142 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8571428571 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 4.34317383033 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 7.41237113402 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375985341305 0.216113520407 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183007018715 0.0766984524023 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147986899304 0.0603063233224 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.375985341305 0.12726935374 295% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Although a lot of people may believe that television differs from the internet, there are some similarities between the internet and television. The first is both the internet and television provide some advertisement. In fact, there are some commercial advertisements on television; similarly, on the internet web pages are designed with some promotions. The second is news. Television broadcasts some news programs at the specific times; likewise, on the internet many pages are provided for news. In fact, both television and the internet provide some materials for the news at their specific ways. The third one is both television and the internet are full with many ideas and information that may be either wrong or informative.

Although a lot of people may believe that television differs from the internet, there are some similarities between the internet and television. The first is both the internet and television provide some advertisement. In fact, there are some commercial advertisements on television; similarly, on the internet web pages are designed with some promotions. The second is news. Television broadcasts some news programs at the specific times; likewise, on the internet many pages are provided for news. In fact, both television and the internet provide some materials for the news at their specific ways. The third one is both television and the internet are full with many ideas and information that may be either wrong or informative.