In the present age, it is argued that weight of people increase and healthy of them decrease in some countries. There are some underlying reasons for this and several plausible solutions would be introduce to mitigate the problem in the essay below.
The issue can be attributable to some main factors. Firstly, life quality is raised more and more. So the needs of each one are satisfied, speacial is food and drink. I think it is the main reason for the weight measure is higher. So fat is a cause make some problem about health. Secondly, food industry is very developed. Go with it, the progression of fast foods and instant food is so fast. Some preservative substance and some chemicals in that is harmed for health with large doses. Be side this, a rare reason is some people, who put some toxic on food for economic efficiency.It makes food look more delicious, fresh and producetive. Moreover, it storages in the body and may be causes cancer. That phenomenon have to be accused and rejected.
I believe that there are some effective solutions can solve this problem. Each people have to know harms of fat and need to do something that good for health. To do that, we have to have measures to propaganda for everyone about what things we should do. Example is doing excercise, eating on time, eating in moderated, not eating so many fried foods, having good diet,...
In conclusion, I have prensented several possible causes and tried to put forwards some viable measures to address the issue for the above mentioned of guments.
- In some country the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them. 78
- TPO 35 :Agree/Disagree: In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.48453608247 254% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80149812734 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55588273919 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 290.88556701 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2993810103 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2222222222 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235023842281 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743027265288 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537314905856 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136038138099 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373981298686 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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